September 24, 2011

The Wall #16

Jenny Matlock

It's time for Saturday Centus and we have a dilly of a challenge this week.  150 words plus the 6 word prompt (in purple) - all dialogue!  Click on the button above to join the Centus and read what creative things others are writing with these guidelines.
Since you are jumping into my story mid run, you can read the first 15 posts @ The Wall.

We once again join the saga:

~“Are we going to make our move? That key isn't the only thing we need.”

“Quiet! You blithering idiot! Your voice could waken the dead!
Are you seriously ordering another martini?”

“Get off my back! You're not my mother! That kid was making enough noise to cover an explosion!”

“Calm yourself! We'll wait until she's left the room...for certain this time! We can't afford to make any more mistakes. It has to be hidden somewhere in that room.”

“What if we get caught? We were lucky last time. She hasn't reported it to the police...yet. Let's hope she's either scared enough not to blab or forgets all about it!”

“Well, that's not bloody likely, now, is it? She doesn't seem like the type to frighten easily...much like her grandfather.”

“Let's just get rid of her!”

“No! You fool! If we can't find the letter...or his journal...we'll need her.”~

10 thoughts about my meanderings:

cj Schlottman said...

Your dialogue in this series is getting better and better. The suspense keeps building! Great addition to the other posts!


Karen S. said...

Oh I love this and a twist to the finding of a journal is just mind consuning fun! Way to go for this centus!

Viki said...

Great continuation. I'm amazed, lol. Yeah, I think its a good idea to keep her too, ha.

Anna said...

Wow, how do you keep it going? Nice use of the prompt. Seamless!
Best wishes,
Anna's SC wk 73'Lunch with B&V'

Judie said...

I was hoping that I could continue my story as well, but unfortunately my characters only drink an occasional glass of wine.

You did great with this!! Nice continuation!!!

June Freaking Cleaver said...

And the story continues...I'll be back next week to find out if they find the letter!

Kat said...

This was wonderfully written dialogue. I found this challenge very difficult. I've been missing for a few months, so I'm off to read the whole story!

Dazee Dreamer said...

soooo good, and got the hairs on my arm getting all tensed up. Can't wait for next week.

Tgoette said...

Super job with this dialog Centus! I love how you have kept this story going! Very creative stuff!

Deborah said...

Brilliantly done! :o)

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