As I looked at the key, the design triggered a memory. Where had I seen this emblem before? Like visions rushing to fill in the blanks, a picture formed in my mind. I hurried to my room to write a letter to my cousin in England. It read, “Dear John, Do you still have the chest Grandfather kept in his room?”
Sharing this post as a continuing saga from Jenny's weekly prompt @ Saturday Centus.
15 thoughts about my meanderings:
How lovely short to the point and cformed a picture in my mind
Excellent !
I love a mystery, especially one that reeks of suspense and mystery and keeps me wanting more !
Good work!! I continued mine too! Next week Jenny's giving us an "evil" prompt!
This is really well written and captivating. I like that you didn't go with a typical use of the "Dear John" letter.
Cheers.
Great continuation, and wonderful way to use the prompt ... totally unexpected!
awesome. I hope there is tons of good fortune in that chest.
Lovely and great use of the prompt. Hope you find the chest....
Excellent work!
Melanie
I really like this one. Very mysterious and evocative.
Donna V.
Very different. I love it! I hope to find out more info!
Thanks for a great post. You made such good use of so few words, telling a mysterious little tale and avoiding the obvious use of "Dear John" Great work.
Namaste..........cj
Intriguing... The prompt works well in the text. But I should read the other installments to better understand this work as a whole.
Best wishes,
Anna
Sanna writes to John Tell-Anna's SC wk 60
Nicely done! A very original and cleverly written take on this week's prompt!
Love the mystery here!
=)
Oh oh oh! Please gimme the complete story! This is so tempting!
Hey! HEY!!!!! Come back here! You can't leave us hanging like this! It is cruel. It is unusual. Now you just have to keep coming back to Saturday Centus to tell us what happens next.
This was great, suspenseful writing. I love the imagery this made in my mind.
Thanks for linking.
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