It's time for Saturday Centus with Jenny and friends! Even though Jenny is not feeling well she's put forth another challenge to keep us on our toes. Feel better soon, Jenny!Today's writing prompt is Friday night football with a limit of 100 other words for a total of 103. To join the fun, click on the button at the left.
So far, I'd visited my family's native country looking for answers, discovered an ancient key, been hit over the head, had my room ransacked, the key stolen and overheard 2 thugs discussing whether they should kill me or not...I needed help! To read the full story, click here.
So far, I'd visited my family's native country looking for answers, discovered an ancient key, been hit over the head, had my room ransacked, the key stolen and overheard 2 thugs discussing whether they should kill me or not...I needed help! To read the full story, click here.
In an effort to keep The Wall going, here's my centus.
~That's strange. Maybe I'd dialed the wrong number. A sinking feeling crept over me. I dialed again. It was ringing!...and ringing. The television in the next room was blaring the Friday night football game. Maybe that's where he is...at the high school game. I let it ring a long time before hanging up.
I sat by the window looking out at the meandering downs, gentle hills and majestic mountains. The cool rains had brought out the fall colors. Everything was blanketed in a patchwork covering with dusky purple edges where the heather faded.
I waited about an hour and dialed again.
No answer.~
11 thoughts about my meanderings:
You seem to carry this story along effortlessly. Well done!
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Bravo!!! I was wondering how you would add this prompt to your continuing story. Wow, you did it again, lol.
"Everything was blanketed in a patchwork covering with dusky purple edges where the heather faded." This is such an elegant way to continue your story. Keep 'em comin'!
Oh beautiful...now we have to find out if she ever gets an answer? She may have to go blow up his television! Great post!
I love the way you have not only continued with your story but have written it is such a descriptive way. Clever writer!
Your story appears seamless! Excellent work!!
I am trying to leave a comment, and I hope this one takes! You did this seamlessly!!!
I agree with Sue. It's almost like a living story.~Ames
You write flawlessly....
much
Another excellent installment of your wonderful story. So many twists and turns and always enjoyable to read...Bravo !!!
I never even thought about seguing from last week to this week for your continued story.
I'm not sure how you do that so seamlessly, but it's always impressive!
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